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MedED is pleased to announce the our brand new MedHums Tutorial Series! This is aimed at supporting Year 4 students doing the Humanities, Philosophy and Law BSc.

The series is led by Gabriela Zbikowska and the first session is taking place on Tuesday 8th of November at 7pm, here on MedAll.

This first session is being delivered by Alex Wright and will help you for your upcoming Care Opinion assessment.

Looking forward to seeing you there!

(This session will be recorded, but please attend so you can ask questions!)

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Alex Wright arw116@ic.ac.uk Care Opinion A MedED LECTURESession structure Assignment recap Narrative selection & analysis Topic selection & discussion Reflection Essay tips Q&A Assignment recap Narrative selection from Care Opinion website based around a theme Narrative analysis Link narratives to a HPL topic (& back again) Reflection Assignment recap Narrative selection from Care Opinion website based around a theme Narrative analysis Link narratives to a HPL topic (& back again) Reflection 3500 words by 18 November Assignment recap Narrative selection from Care Opinion website based around a theme Narrative analysis Link narratives to a HPL topic (& back again) Reflection 3500 words by 18 November What is a narrative? “apersonal narrative is a distinct form of communication: It is meaning making through the shaping of experience; a way of understanding one’s own or other’sactions; of organising events, objects, feelings, or thoughts in relation to each other; ofconnectingand seeing the consequencesof actions, events, feelings, or thoughts over time (in the past, present, and/or future)” S. (eds.). The SAGE Handbook of Qualitative Research.5th edition. USA, SAGE Publications. pp. 546-560.& Lincoln, Y. Why narratives? Meaningful Multi-layered Nuanced Connection with a reader Memorable & powerful Individual Completely subjective Greenhalgh, T. (2016) Cultural contexts of health: the use of narrative research in the health sector.Health Evidence Network (HEN) synthesis report 49. Copenhagen, WHO: Regional Office for Europe. Choosing your narratives & topic Narratives • Similar or different? • Length? • Number? • Overriding message? • Links between them? Choosing your narratives & topic Narratives Topic • Similar or different? • Search based on interests • Length? • Refine based on narratives • Number? • Overriding message? • Links between them? Choosing your narratives & topic Narratives Topic • Similar or different? • Search based on interests • Length? • Refine based on narratives • Number? • Overriding message? • Links between them? Analysing your narratives Three elements: • Plot-based • Linguistic • Functional ~Mishler Analysing your narratives Three elements: Sociological domains: • Plot-based • Nature or purpose • The making • Linguistic • The consuming • Functional • The power-plays in the story • The wider impacts ~Mishler ~Plummer Analysing your narratives Sociological domains: Three elements: • Plot-based • Nature or purpose • The making • Linguistic • The consuming • Functional • The power-plays in the story • The wider impacts ~Mishler ~Plummer Typology. Journal of Narrative and Life History.5 (2), 87- 123. Other suggestions: change, and social worlds. London, Routledge.essman, C. K. (2008) Narrative Methods for the Human Sciences. USA, Sage Publications. E.g . "Frustrated and disappointed" bathroom and come back to a consultant who told me I shouldn’t have left because they wants to scan me. When doing theto the scan they tell me my pain is on my right side. I say it is the left side, not the right, but am told no, it is the right side and I have a small harmless cyst that’s on the right. I said again that the pain is on the left but am told that they have been doing this 30 years and I need to trust them. I responded that I have been in this body for 30 years you’ll need to trust me when I say it’s the left side. I was then told that it was it was nothing serious and to go home take paracetamol. I’ve been dealing with this pain for 8 days now on pain relief far stronger with no luck, and it is getting worse so I asked for a second opinion. This was refused. I was told that they have been doing this for a long time and they know their stuff. I said it isn’t acceptable, being told where my pain is and is not, and that I’m not actually in pain just a little discomfort and suggesting I am exaggerating. Then being refused a second opinion which I believe to be illegal in the UK. I was told that if I desperately needed to stay in then I could but they weren't going to do anything and I’d be sent home tomorrow. I said I’d like to stay in and see the morning round doctor, a second opinion. I found their bedside manner atrocious and the practice old fashioned and seemingly from training 30+ years ago. I am so disappointed. I said I felt like I came in and was being sent home with the same problem and I was being dismissed. They laughed and that is hurting!exaggerating the pain on my right side. It is not sore on my right side- there is no pain there - it is my left side I am so frustrated and disappointed with this tonight. https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 E.g. Plot points: • Scene-setting – ‘the ward’ • Left vs right • Time • Focus on the qualities of the pain • Characters • Told in relation to self • Summary at the end • Emotion in title & conclusion https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 Plot "Frustrated and disappointed" bathroom and come back to a consultantwho told me I shouldn’t have left because they wants to scan me. When doing theto the scan they tell me my pain is on my right side. I say it is the left side, not the right, but am told no, it is the right side and I have a small harmless cyst that’s on the right. I said again that the pain is on the left but am told that they have been doing this 30 years and I need to trust them. I responded that I have been in this body for 30 yearsyou’ll need to trust me when I say it’s the left side. I was then told that it was it was nothing serious and to go home take paracetamol. I’ve been dealing with this pain for 8 days now on pain relief far stronger with no luck, and it is getting worse so I asked for a second opinion. This was refused. I was told that they have been doing this for a long time and they know their stuff. I said it isn’t acceptable, being told where my pain is and is not, and that I’m not actually in pain just a little discomfort and suggesting I am exaggerating. Then being refused a second opinion which I believe to be illegal in the UK. I was told that if I desperately needed to stay in then I could but they weren't going to do anything and I’d be sent home tomorrow. I said I’d like to stay in and see the morning round doctor, a second opinion. I found their bedside manner atrocious and the practice old fashioned and seemingly from training 30+ years ago. I amso disappointed. I said I felt like I came in and was being sent home with the same problem and I was being dismissed. They laughed and that is hurting!exaggerating the pain on my right side. It is not sore on my right side- there is no pain there - it is my left side I am so frustrated and disappointed with this tonight. https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 E.g. Plot points: Linguistic points: • Scene-setting – ‘the • Sense of rushing, then ward’ abrupt stops • Left vs right • – still in the midstnt • Time • Focus on the qualities of • Direct conflict in phrases the pain • Repetition • Characters • Passive voice– powerless, unheard • Told in relation to self • Summary at the end • Ownership in pain • Emotion in title & • Re-iterating emotions conclusion https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 E.g. Plot points: Linguistic points: Functionalpoints: • Scene-setting – ‘the • Sense of rushing, then • Shared on Care Opinion ward’ abrupt stops UK • Left vs right • – still in the midstnt • back to the hospital?g • Time • Focus on the qualities of • Direct conflict in phrases • Speaking to other the pain • Repetition service users • Characters • Passive voice– • Also seen by educators powerless, unheard & students • Told in relation to self • A sense of • Summary at the end • Ownership in pain powerlessness in the • Emotion in title & • Re-iterating emotions test – sharing story to conclusion reclaim the experience? https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 Discussion • Interpretation informing theory, theory informing interpretation • Identify themes within your analyses that build into your chosen topic • Explore the literature • Link the narratives & wider reading into your themes • Point, Evidence, Explain, Link E.g . Phenomenology of acute pain Emotion: • Hurt & frustration • Interweaved throughout • Conflicts seem to exacerbate • Relaying to reader https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 E.g. Phenomenology of acute pain Emotion: • Hurt & frustration • Interweaved throughout • Conflicts seem to exacerbate • Relaying to reader Time: • Specifics of time • Shifts from past to present tense – disorientation? • Still a sense of ‘in the midst’ https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 E.g. Phenomenology of acute pain Emotion: Lacking shared meaning: • Hurt & frustration • Left vs right • Using ‘classic’ characteristics of pain but • Interweaved throughout told from own experience – ‘my pain’ • Conflicts seem to exacerbate • Finding a shared meaning with the reader? • Relaying to reader Time: • Specifics of time • disorientation?t to present tense – • Still a sense of ‘in the midst’ https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 E.g. Phenomenology of acute pain Emotion: Lacking shared meaning: • Hurt & frustration • Left vs right • Interweaved throughout • Using ‘classic’ characteristics of pain but told from own experience – ‘my pain’ • Conflicts seem to exacerbate • Finding a shared meaning with the reader? • Relaying to reader Time: Powerlessness & invalidation: • Medical learning vs lived experience– contrasts • Specifics of time • Sense of relentlessness in the telling • Shifts from past to present tense – • Passive voice– loss of power disorientation? • Forming meanin– reclaiming their experience? • Still a sense of ‘in the midst’ https://www.careopinion.org.uk/992499 Where next? • Select 2-3 other narratives à analyse & build on themes • Wider reading • Philosophers – Havi Carel, Sartre etc. • Other expressions of pain – Deborah Padfield’s pain photos, poetry etc. • Medicine’s perspective on pain • Definitions of pain • Use narratives to guide the reading, inform understanding & take the reading back to the narrativesReflection How did your position influence your interpretation of the narratives? What have you learned in this process?Essay tips Plan before writing Strong introduction – scope, purpose & structure of the essay Introduce & justify your topic & methods Point, Evidence, Explain, Link Each sentence & paragraph should flow, building into your overall point Reference as you go along Don’t worry about the word count at first Finish draft early – read through, edit & ask others to check grammar & sense-making Do: • Trust your judgement, but be critical • Start early & take your time • Justify your topic, methods & choice of narratives • Use a range of analytical styles – linguistic, plot-based & functional • each other understanding using the narratives & wider reading – and use these to build on • Consistent reflection • Plan before you start writing • Take care of yourself • Be patient • Talk to each other & ask for help if you need Pitfalls • Over-interpretation • Over-objectivity • Making assumptions • Comparing to others • Struggling in silence • Procrastination! • Second-hand referencing – read what you cite! GOOD LUCK & THANK YOU FOR COMING! PLEASE FILL IN THE FEEDBACK FORM! Any questions? arw116@ic.ac.uk